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The Writing In No More Heroes by Pltnm06Ghost The Writing In No More Heroes by Pltnm06Ghost
All right, so this comic is old. Really old. REEEAAALLLYY REALLY REALLY old. I've done this nearly 2 years ago, but I was too lazy to get started adding the text and uploading it. To celebrate the release of No More Heroes 2: Desperate Struggle for the Wii, I decided to get off of my lazy but and get this old as dirt comic uploaded. It makes fun of the awkward writing in the first No More Heroes. I've seen someone do a joke similar to this, so I decided to do my take on this weird scene.

So I've done the bubbles and text in my Tech School's Graphic Design class ( since you know, still no computer and all XD ) and I've used a felt tip pen to ink the outlines. Comparing the panels I draw now to the panels I used to draw around this time, I've really improved. Maybe because I actually use a ruler / straight edge for this stuff now XD I also used a new manga font a friend suggested to me a while ago. As you can see, I was far too lazy to draw the Bizarre Jelly logo on Travis' shirt, so I decided to copy / paste the original image :lmao:

As for No More Heroes 2, I bought it the first day it came out, I've beaten it, AND I FREAKING LOVE THIS GAME!! THE MUSIC, THE BOSSES, THE GAMEPLAY, ALL AROUND EPIC!!! : D Also, the rank 2 assassin has to be the greatest assassin EVER :love: I say go out and buy this game in hopes of getting a No More Heroes 3 .V. Although if there were to be a NMH3, there would have to be a new protagonist in Travis' place :tears:
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maxking74 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012
I love Travis's face in panel 6
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanks. I've always been so proud of that face XD
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PekoeIsteaChan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
That was actually the first thing I thought when I was watching this...
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2011  Professional General Artist
I'm positive anyone with a decent grasp of the English language would have thought so as well, but that cutscene like every other in the franchise is awesome :D
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blackdeadtree Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
epic. u gotta love death metal and travis
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Professional General Artist
Indeed. Travis is the definitive hero of all otaku :U
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blackdeadtree Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011
ALL HAIL TRAVIS! or something like that
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Professional General Artist
Pretty much :D
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Neko-nekochan23 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Student General Artist
Yeah Travis Number one counts as Title XDD fail on his part
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2010  Professional General Artist
He shall now go forth and master the ways of the assassin :U
BTW, thanks for the fave :P
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praedatorius Featured By Owner May 18, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
My roommate always laughs when he hears that line. The funny thing is that I never picked up on its silliness il I asked him to explain why he was laughing. Sweet comic.
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner May 21, 2010  Professional General Artist
Thanks :P It takes a while to notice that there was a fault in the writing, I understand completely. Another funny thing is he contradicts himself by calling Bad Girl a pervert when he's a huge pervert himself :lmao:
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praedatorius Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I love in No More Heroes 2 when Travis is about to fight Charlie MacDonald, the football guy. Charlie launches into outer space with his entourage of cheerleaders who then form a giant mech suit with their bodies, and Travis just nonchalantly comments, "I thought something like this might happen."
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Professional General Artist
That was hilarious XD although it disappointed me that the boss fight was so easy and this was Suda's way of working around a possible 51 bosses for the game .V.
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Randommode Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
:lmao: Poor Travis he's his own irony
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2010  Professional General Artist
Indeed. He's known as the Crownless King / No More Hero in the 2nd game :rofl:
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DeathLee28 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
lol
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Quetzalcoatl2k Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010  Student Digital Artist
As always, good shit man.

Yeah, it's gonna be tough seeing Travis on a game for the final time, but maybe the new protagonist will be awesome too.

I'm also working on my No More Stoners: Desperate Struggle pic (took me forever to come up with an idea, but I'm finally ready to draw it).
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Professional General Artist
Thanks :lol:

I hope so as well. Let's just see if he can DFD ( Downward F***ing Dog ) like Travis can :lmao:

OH SWEET MORE NO MORE STONERS : D And it's about time you came up with that idea .V.
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Aivilo0 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
I still haven't played this game, I watched my brother played it before though.
lol the second to last panel XD
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
You'll have to play it eventually, it's an amazing game :lol:

This shows Travis takes being Number 1 a bit too seriously :lmao:
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Shrapnel-Jones Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TALK ABOUT FASHIONABLY LATE, FUCKFACE


God damn this game knows exactly who it's making fun of, and it's amazing for that.
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
I did say it was drawn nearly 2 years ago :dizzy:
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Shrapnel-Jones Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was quoting the new one :3c
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
D:

Curse this headache scrambling my brain :iconfacepalmplz:
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TheCirkuzFr3ek Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So Travis is like Muscle Power now?

NUMBAH WON!
XD

But yeah, this makes me regret not getting a Wii.
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
TRAVIS TOUCHDOWN IS THE RED CYCLONE!?!? :O

Then I guess you'll need to get a Wii eventually. You're missing out on extremely epic stuff here :D
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TheCirkuzFr3ek Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know, I've seen footage.
The Wii, it mocks me like a small child mocks a fat kid.
;_;
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
LOL :lmao:
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Dementolo Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
I thought this exactly when I played the first game!
Hilarious comic!

And I agree Travis doesn't seem to mind the whole title thing anymore, with the whole Crowless King, No More Hero and...pfft..baby brother. haha

But I really wish we could play as Henry the whole time if we wanted or got more backstory between him and Silvia.
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
Thanks =)

Indeed. Opinions can change over the course of 3 years after all XD

Yeah, I was extremely pissed since I could play as Henry only once .V. As a matter of fact, a hack was recently released allowing you to play through the entire game AS Henry. That is if you've modded your Wii, which I still haven't done yet T_T
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Dementolo Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
Well, I guess I'm out with that too. I have no clue on how that modding thing works. BUT if someone recorded it and with the wonders of youtube, I could watch this Henry mod! lol
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
Indeed. Speaking of the mod, not too long ago I saw a video of HEnry fighting Kimmy Howell : D

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Dementolo Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010
I just watched it!!
And it's pretty awesome.

I don't understand why they couldn't have of put the option to have Henry playable like that in the first place! lol
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
Because Suda 51 likes to tease his fans XD
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LayD-HOHO Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
lol the FFFFFFFFF face Travis is making is great xD
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
Travis is very serious about his "titles" XD
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SlvrNightX Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
LOL

Hey, i don't mind the fact that Travis isn't gonna be in anymore NMH games. I didn't really like him much anyways...he was an ass for no reason most of the time <_<

It'd be awesome if Shinobu or Henry became the protagonist XD
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
Actually if you played NMH2, you can see he gained a large amount of honor and developed enough character to become the manliest man in video game history :toocool: He's not a total douche at all XD

Yeah that would be awesome. But since Suda said the sequel will be the end of Travis' story, I highly doubt they would become the protagonists for the next game :(
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SlvrNightX Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
If by "manliest man in video game history" you mean "most perverted" than i'm more inclined to agree with you XD

Well, it's the end of Travis's...that doesn't mean Henry and Shinobu don't have their own stories.

Plus, you got to play as Henry only once, and Shinobu only twice. Maybe there was a secondary purpose in that. It's possible Suda wanted to see how people would react to the playstyles of those two characters.
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
Not just that, but he gained a large amount of morality and thought about how screwed up assassins are. You'll just have to play the game to get it :P

Hmm, maybe you're right. Since somebody's working on a hack to play with Henry throughout the entire game, then everyone must've reacted positively. Not to mention there was no mention of what deal Shinobu made with Sylvia. Not to mention Henry never finished his fight with Travis like he said .V. It could be possible either one of them could be the protagonist of the next game.
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SlvrNightX Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
Ah.

Yeah. There's still a few questions left unanswered in the series.

I'll laugh so much if Henry's the protagonist in the next one and Travis is the first boss.

Me: "What...Travis was reduced to a TUTORIAL BOSS?!"
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2010  Professional General Artist
That would be awesome XD
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Trebball Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010
YO that's ILL HAHA

Great comic scene yo haha, make more of em haha, I laugh when Travis just cus a storm haha
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Pltnm06Ghost Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2010  Professional General Artist
LOL thanks

Apparently in NMH2, he and everyone refers to himself as "The No More Hero" since he walked away from the bloodshed after becoming "Number 1." I guess after 3 years, his opinion about titles have changed XD
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